Haiku -Between Our Toes

lapping waves on shore first coloured corals crunch between our toes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Thirtyseven Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 8:42 AM
You've taken me to a very nice place, thank you.
Pinet Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 5:32 PM
The image conjured by your words leaves me with a warm cozy feeling. Emile.
White Avatar
April 5, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Ohh, that sound is lovely, the picture it evokes in my brain too :)
Dupins Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 11:32 PM
Love it! Time for a vacay.
Smith Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 9:22 PM
I feel the warmth Charmaine...
Mawu Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 5:49 PM
love
Smith Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 5:32 PM
I can imagine a couple holding hands splashing in the surf...lovely ku Charmu
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Appeals to the senses...so soothing!
Green Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 4:31 PM
Soft and alluring, you bring the sea and the beauty it creates to life in your wonderful poem my sweet friend. Another "sigh" moment for me.
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