Haiku Anti War

babies are buried
                                    now we are happy relaxed
                                          single missile lost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 7, 2015 at 12:28 AM
Good message. I'd slightly modify the middle line to "Now we're happily relaxed"-- you need an adverb there to be grammatically correct.
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