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Haiku and Senryu of Winter and Love

waiting now, anxious lest the cold white invasion smother all our hopes a man and a woman sculptured in snow, the snow shines they melt into one snowfall strikes silence wind sings hosanna on high harmony in nature the earth turns to mud love plants itself, furrows deep into the thawed world even loneliness must shed its heavy coat, now sparrows are heralds ice covers the earth cold, resolute, beautiful only the sun shines so many snowfalls, so many buddings in spring, so long to claim one's life

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Date: 12/22/2021 6:07:00 PM
Each Haiku or Senryu is a small gem. I especially like the 5th entry with "loneliness that sheds its heavy coat." The personification is sharp, creative, moving. What a grand read on this gray December day! Be well. Brian
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L. J. Carber
Date: 12/23/2021 7:36:00 AM
Sometimes, Brian, I honestly surprise myself, and say, how did I ever come up with that?
Date: 3/2/2021 2:56:00 PM
Very creative work. It is expressive and emotive in its on way. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/3/2021 11:12:00 AM
Thanks, Sara!
Date: 2/2/2021 4:28:00 PM
this exudes a feeling of winter and love turning to spring!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/6/2021 7:25:00 AM
Thanks Andrea-- personally with our 3rd snowstorm coming, I can't wait!

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