Poet Destroyer A Poet Haiku

Haiku Jam

__HAIKU  SLAM__
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((**HAIKU GYM**))

~Haiku press~
one sweaty work out
spot me, and count 5-7-5
dumbbells all around

~ Sweat Garden~
drench of human lawn
leotard planting between
dew drops under chin

~Listen To Your Heart~
Wink of a smile
Healthy news, swallow up blues
Kellogg's Raisin Bran 
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((**SWAT TEAM**))

~10 commandments~
Haiku me and you
So much for the golden rule
Whatever you say

~Rhyme Zone~
Test your might tonight.
Gonna rhyme it with so much fun.
Like the mid day sun.

~Broken Tablet~
It's five seven five
I'm a haiku rule breaker
using four six four

~Big Deal~
LoL contest
Sweet pretty haiku sunrise
Not a, limerick
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((**WILD WEST HAIKU**))

~Lone Ranger~
This is Texas man
Rain dries before it hits ground
What stupid cowboy

~Howdy Partner~ 
Memory of Texas  
Take me beyond shores
Let's become best friends

~Avatar~
Cold cactus desert 
Warm coyote blood all around
New Indian fur coat

~Monsoon~
raining arrowhead 
where are all the buffaloes 
pretty pink tepee 

~Acme~ 
Road runner meep meep.
Stupid coyote needs fix.
I ate a baby
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by;p.d.

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Andrea Dietrich July 21, 2013 at 12:09 AM Pd, hurry and read the soupmail I just sent you. Very important!! But you have at least until tomorrow evening before I do anything with my contest.

Harry Horsman December 30, 2012 at 5:06 AM your Haiku's just get better and better...these are brilliant...

Karen Deeks February 2, 2012 at 9:56 PM Ha ha ha I feel a rebellion...Haiku Press, broken tablet and acme are my favourites.. I love forward thinking and you added a contemporary feel to haiku.. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown November 30, 2011 at 1:07 PM Thank you for your kind comments on my writing. They are very much appreciated P.D. I am glad you like my poem well enough to list it as a winner. I enjoyed reading your many haiku today magnificent. Love, Carol

Clay Robbins November 29, 2011 at 3:46 AM Pen in overdrive; Shifting Syllabically; On a rythmic road.... So much fun romping through your tri-lines... The p.d. is five; No, seven times the poet; I will ever be. (:D)) cr ...'preciate yur checking out my T.D. Hiaku.... I had not an ounce of it, jus' cause... no special reason.

Debbie Guzzi November 28, 2011 at 6:21 PM glad to help you pd...post fast...i will wait for you to polish it up...we'll try to get you a chance at the brass ring ;) write me that animal haiku! pick a winter animal [can be bug too!] Light & Love

Katherine Stella November 26, 2011 at 10:41 AM holy bat Haiku's g/f you got me smiling bigtime on these and I thought I could do these boy you got my act beat me luvs 1st one most cause that is so me at times lol keep em coming enjoyed and thanks for stopping by my pager too huggers and happy holidays

Tahera Mannan November 25, 2011 at 5:52 AM Hey PD I love this one. It is not only unique, but lovely. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours Darling. Save me a slice of turkey.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire November 24, 2011 at 6:59 PM Dear Linda, Great set of Haiku Thank-YOU for YOUR Thanksgiving Day Wishes Prayers of Health and Prosperity to YOU today and through the Christmas SeasonLOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER... Harry

Iolanda Scripca November 24, 2011 at 12:54 AM Congratulations for such a great series of Haiku! Thank you for your wishes. I hope you are going to have a great Thanksgiving.You know? What happened to you as a Mom, happened to me about 7 years ago...he was also 19! He's just fine now...If you get bored tomorrow evening we can IM :0) Love, iolanda

Bl Devnath November 23, 2011 at 7:15 AM Nice in all ways, penned fantastically. In respect to Avatar, presently this is happening.Thanks, bl

Michael J. Falotico November 21, 2011 at 6:59 AM Congrats you are now the "Queen of Haiku's" so well done and with smiles... hugs across the states to you.. Michael

Cory Long November 20, 2011 at 9:04 AM i like the wild west set.. cory

M. Hussain Effendi November 20, 2011 at 7:28 AM I like the name you chose for this. I wonder how much you gave into this one???

Gwendolen Song November 19, 2011 at 4:29 PM Love the rep count on the workout one!! lol.

Gwendolen Song November 19, 2011 at 4:27 PM I am laughing my rear off on some of these haiku...u are a great haik-ist! Gwendolen

Jack Horne November 19, 2011 at 2:26 PM LOL, great fun haiku selection, PD. Thanks - enjoyed your contest : ) Have a great weekend, my friend

Matthew Anish November 18, 2011 at 9:20 AM A very "healthy" poem! You then segued into a picture of the Lone Star State. Have you been reading any comic books recently? I sold my collection for $200 a while back. At 56 I have matured to the point where I not only read Marvel - I also can appreicate DC and Archie. I was the editor of Horseman #3 a number of years ago. Peace & Love Matthew Anish i

Shannon Deane November 17, 2011 at 7:32 PM Good to see you back in the 'saddle' so to speak...love how you played with the haiku's and made them your own...drives me crazy when I have to try to follow a set pattern...if it doesn't somehow 'flow' it doesn't usually get finished for awhile...luv, and hugs shannon

Elizabeth Wesley November 17, 2011 at 7:12 PM Great ku's, all of them - have to say I like Broken Tablet the best, - far as I'm concerned, rules are made to be broken within reason of course. Any contests for these?

Daver Austin November 17, 2011 at 2:53 PM A horn of plenty Haikus. I like those pink buffaloes and lots more. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick November 17, 2011 at 6:48 AM Creative use of the Haiku form..Glad that I chose this one to read this morn..My poem about the Clematis was just a write using the "Song Of Solomon"..I am the one sponsoring the contest..Just the thoughts came to me..Just for fun..Have a great day..Thanks for stopping by...I am on a little just to check comments so that they won't build up...Sara

M.I.A . November 17, 2011 at 1:47 AM PD, I've never been strike with haiku in my life thus i'm always amazed by those who writes it but most of all, by the rare few who simply breathes it.... in yours, it's alive!!

Andrea Dietrich November 16, 2011 at 11:18 PM Irma, I had a rotten day but I wanted to still come here tonight and tell you thanks for the win and wanted to see these rule breaking haiku of yours. Yep, girl, you are a RULE breaker. But I break the rules too when I do the metaphorical ones I love to do for YOU. I don't know why metaphors have to be against the rules. I think you did really great with those kind. The ones I liked best here are haiku gym set. The very first one is super clever. Dumbbells all around hahaha. that was priceless.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 16, 2011 at 10:19 PM Enjoyed this haiku traffic jam of yours, pd -- haha that sweat haiku stood out for me, drip drip-- if I wrote mine, it would be "sweet haiku" lol ;) and hmm I thought you said you lived there in chat?? You went out??? you Caannn't Amri! tsk, tsk! and ok honestly when I saw your title, no kidding first thought that popped to mind: Mango Jam-- hahahaha ^_^

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