Notes About The Poem

Over the years we have taken many trips to Colorado starting when the girls were very young  – what a magnificent place.  But each year, I was saddened by the rapid spread of a beetle that kills the tall lodgepole pine trees.  Looking across the countryside, you can now see very large areas where pine trees once stood majestic against the sky is grey and dead.  I grieved that future generations, my future grandkids included, would not see the beauty of the forest heavy with these trees.  However, this is not the end of the story, now that the pine trees are out of the way, aspen trees are making a comeback.  These white bark trees with the shimmering leaves are a different beauty but just as majestic.  The lesson:  even in death there is life – don’t give up hope.

Haiku 9 Life

lodgepoles pines fall 
dead, beetle attack, new life
emerges -- aspens
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Jones Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Infestations can be so heartbreaking . . . but, brings forth anew. Great Haiku David. *S* Cynthia
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 12:05 AM
I love that you brought new life.
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Thank you so much for the notes - it filled my heart with joy to know that in the midst of despair their is hope - great haiku:-) hugs Jan xxx
Meade Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 3:54 PM
I was hoping you would read my poem -- thank-you! In our many "mini" deaths -- their is life -- abundant life!! Here's to yours!! All the best.
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 12:48 PM
Wonderful haiku, David! ;) enjoyed it and your notes. Xxxx D.
Meade Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 3:56 PM
Thank-you for your time and note -- it makes me feel good! Here's to your life -- may it be filled with love and hugs! All the best.
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 12:41 PM
- Well done in one Haiku, David ! - Never give up :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Meade Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 4:04 PM
Thank-you for your comment -- your praise is precious -- I'm walking around with my chest puffed out . . . then I hear a voice shouting from above . . . "the toilet is plugged" . . . pulled back to reality -- "Dad, you got to get this fixed!" May we never give up!! Keep following your passion. . .
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