Haiku 9

floating white puffed clouds fire tinged sunset's final glow cicadas chorus Copyright, September 28, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/7/2014 9:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win Faye! I love the sound and flow of your lovely haiku.

Roy Jerden

Date: 10/5/2014 5:50:00 AM

Very nice nature haiku, Faye. I liked the turn very much.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/5/2014 5:14:00 AM

this is my type of haiku, it's a lovely one - congrats on your win in andrea's contest :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/4/2014 8:27:00 AM

From another three Faye Congratulations on your well deserved win. I really enjoyed this reading this haiku.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/4/2014 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this perfect Haiku Faye.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/4/2014 5:53:00 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you, Faye

Jan Allison

Date: 10/4/2014 4:09:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2014 1:53:00 AM

A very pretty haiku this is. Thanks for supporting my contest and entering a fine example of haiku. Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/29/2014 9:48:00 AM

Me too, Faye. Good luck in the contest

Jan Allison

Date: 9/28/2014 12:56:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Faye - Andrea will have a tough job with so many different forms to judge:-) good luck with the contest. Hugs jan xx