Haiku 9

floating white puffed clouds
fire tinged sunset's final glow
cicadas chorus
Copyright, September 28, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Marcum Wong Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Faye! I love the sound and flow of your lovely haiku.
Jerden Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Very nice nature haiku, Faye. I liked the turn very much.
Puddifoot Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 5:14 AM
this is my type of haiku, it's a lovely one - congrats on your win in andrea's contest :)
Yvonne Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 8:27 AM
From another three Faye Congratulations on your well deserved win. I really enjoyed this reading this haiku.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on your win with this perfect Haiku Faye.
Mehta Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you, Faye
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:09 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 1:53 AM
A very pretty haiku this is. Thanks for supporting my contest and entering a fine example of haiku. Congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 9:48 AM
Me too, Faye. Good luck in the contest
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 12:56 PM
Beautiful imagery Faye - Andrea will have a tough job with so many different forms to judge:-) good luck with the contest. Hugs jan xx
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