Haiku 9 - 2020

freezing rain warning
tomorrow everywhere ice
slip sliding along
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January 11, 2020 at 10:20 PM
If you're 10 years old, you are happy to hear the warning. No school? Do you play sled tomorrow? Do you skate? Exciting,isn't it? If you are adult enough, you're just melancholy. (-_^)wink
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January 12, 2020 at 3:22 PM
so true!! the children are delighted no doubt, could well have a day off tomorrow:) those of us adult enough are a bit melancholy but mostly just concerned we'll fall and break a bone!! know I am. I think the storm is mostly over now. It could have been far worse, though. Ontario and Quebec got much worse weather than we did.
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