Haiku

a whimsical wind
tantalizes turgid bulbs
spring’s fever rising


©2/22/2018

submitted to – Haiku – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Deborah Beachboard

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Andrea Dietrich

March 1, 2018 at 8:05 PM

I really like your KU, JOhn. I'm seeing a lot of good ones, and not just on the winner list!

John Lawless

March 3, 2018 at 9:54 AM

Thanks Andrea, I'm still somewhat at odds with the "new" KU. Mostly because i haven't sorted out if it is a composite of the Senryu and Haiku covering everything...Oh Well....'tis the plight of the poet...