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Haiku 98

new cherry blossoms
gather along the pathway
heavenly fragrance

bright yellow daisies
bees gather to make a hive
dangerous pathway

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/4/2023 3:42:00 AM

love these - yes, those bees can be nasty little critters, LOL

Silent One

Date: 8/16/2023 9:46:00 AM

Two lovely haiku... I hope you are well..

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/25/2023 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for your comment. Took a fall and missed a step thinking it was one instead of two. Luckily nothing broken but have sore arm that getting more movable. Hope you are well also. love phyl

Ink Empress

Date: 8/15/2023 1:05:00 AM

Cherry blossoms and daisies. Such gorgeous haiku. I absolutely love the way so much can be felt when reading few words that paint such vivid imagery. Heavenly write.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/25/2023 10:59:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment on my haiku. Love the flowers as they are so uplifting. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2023 12:43:00 PM

nice summer ones, Phyllis. Sure enjoy seeing you here with new poetry

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/21/2023 5:20:00 PM

Thanks my friend it seems my writing has become sparse lately. Need to wake up the muse it went on a long vacation. lol. Have a great weekend with family. Enjoy your visit. love phyl

Arastu Goyal

Date: 7/19/2023 5:48:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Phyllis, loved reading this :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/21/2023 5:18:00 PM

Thanks Arastu for your comment..Flowers are so lovely in summer. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/19/2023 1:55:00 PM

. Yes,a heavenly fragrance ... avoid the bees ... lovely summer haiku, Phyllis :) - hugs

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/21/2023 5:17:00 PM

Hope your summer is improving and you are getting more sun than rain. Hot out this next week and garden is wilting away under it not to mention the birds loving the raspberries and peas. Have a great weekend. love phyl

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/19/2023 10:49:00 AM

Wonderful! God bless you. Love, Gina

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/21/2023 5:16:00 PM

Thanks Gina for your comment. Have a blessed weekend. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2023 10:39:00 AM

A lovely/pretty write. Cherry blossoms are a heavenly fragrance with their pretty pink color. I also love yellow daisies. Have a great/blessed day writing away..............

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/21/2023 5:16:00 PM

Thanks Paula for your comment and yes cherry blossoms are so pretty and so are daisies. Flowers always brighten up my day. Have a great weekend. love phyl

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