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Haiku 98

new cherry blossoms
gather along the pathway
heavenly fragrance

bright yellow daisies
bees gather to make a hive
dangerous pathway

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Jack Horne

September 4, 2023 at 3:42 AM

love these - yes, those bees can be nasty little critters, LOL

Silent One

August 16, 2023 at 9:46 AM

Two lovely haiku... I hope you are well..

Phyllis Babcock

August 25, 2023 at 11:02 AM

Thanks for your comment. Took a fall and missed a step thinking it was one instead of two. Luckily nothing broken but have sore arm that getting more movable. Hope you are well also. love phyl

Ink Empress

August 15, 2023 at 1:05 AM

Cherry blossoms and daisies. Such gorgeous haiku. I absolutely love the way so much can be felt when reading few words that paint such vivid imagery. Heavenly write.

Phyllis Babcock

August 25, 2023 at 10:59 AM

Thank you for your kind comment on my haiku. Love the flowers as they are so uplifting. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

July 20, 2023 at 12:43 PM

nice summer ones, Phyllis. Sure enjoy seeing you here with new poetry

Phyllis Babcock

July 21, 2023 at 5:20 PM

Thanks my friend it seems my writing has become sparse lately. Need to wake up the muse it went on a long vacation. lol. Have a great weekend with family. Enjoy your visit. love phyl

Arastu Goyal

July 19, 2023 at 5:48 PM

Beautiful imagery Phyllis, loved reading this :)

Phyllis Babcock

July 21, 2023 at 5:18 PM

Thanks Arastu for your comment..Flowers are so lovely in summer. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 19, 2023 at 1:55 PM

. Yes,a heavenly fragrance ... avoid the bees ... lovely summer haiku, Phyllis :) - hugs

Phyllis Babcock

July 21, 2023 at 5:17 PM

Hope your summer is improving and you are getting more sun than rain. Hot out this next week and garden is wilting away under it not to mention the birds loving the raspberries and peas. Have a great weekend. love phyl

Regina Mcintosh

July 19, 2023 at 10:49 AM

Wonderful! God bless you. Love, Gina

Phyllis Babcock

July 21, 2023 at 5:16 PM

Thanks Gina for your comment. Have a blessed weekend. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith

July 19, 2023 at 10:39 AM

A lovely/pretty write. Cherry blossoms are a heavenly fragrance with their pretty pink color. I also love yellow daisies. Have a great/blessed day writing away..............

Phyllis Babcock

July 21, 2023 at 5:16 PM

Thanks Paula for your comment and yes cherry blossoms are so pretty and so are daisies. Flowers always brighten up my day. Have a great weekend. love phyl

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