Haiku 97

cough and fever form
holiday is spent in bed
 cancelled family time

chicken noodle soup
stopping dehydration now
spoon to mouth feeding
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Horne Avatar
June 18, 2023 at 3:49 AM
hope you're feeling much better now, my friend - yes, they say that chicken soup really does help
Slaughter Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Whoever came up with the "chicken noodle soup" thing as a cure-all for just about everything that ails us, should go down in the history books as a national...or international...hero, and celebrated as such. So sorry about the "canceled family time".
Goldsmith Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 11:42 AM
I enjoyed your write. Sorry you have been sick. Soup/rest are the best 2 things. Have a blessed day writing away..............
Babcock Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 6:04 PM
Thanks Paula for your thoughts. Yes lots of soup and rest. Still not better as yet. Thanks love phyl
Kendrick Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 2:36 PM
Sad that you are sick but thank God for chicken soup. I enjoyed reading this one today and I hope you are feeling better. Your visits to my page were delightful. Sara
Turner Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 9:51 AM
Get well soon, Phyllis. Great to see you again:)
Babcock Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Thanks Daniel. Will do. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 9:45 AM
- ... holiday is spent in bed ... so sad .... hurry up and get well ... drink a lot of chicken noodle soup ... spring is knocking at your door, dear Phyllis - hugs
Babcock Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Yes soup and water and drink, drink drink but glad spring has decided to show up. Thanks my friend. love phyl
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