Haiku 96

Haiku 96
	
	
	woodland stream
	whirlpools tying water 
	into smoke rings

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Richard Lamoureux

October 19, 2013 at 6:34 PM

I can picture this. Well done.

Nette Onclaud

October 18, 2013 at 12:04 PM

superbly done with a greeat juxtaposition, jack... idol!..:) huggs

Jack Jordan

October 19, 2013 at 11:37 PM

Thanks a lot, Nette... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

October 17, 2013 at 7:50 PM

this is one of your best. LOVE it.

Jack Jordan

October 19, 2013 at 11:36 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I'm glad you liked it... Jack

Donna Jones

October 17, 2013 at 6:37 PM

Totally awesome....I'll always think of you when I see one now....:-)

Jack Jordan

October 18, 2013 at 12:28 PM

Smoke rings for a non-smoker? Hmmm... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 17, 2013 at 12:47 PM

- Competent !!! - Well done,Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

October 17, 2013 at 12:50 PM

Sorry... I typed my response tp Drake in the wrong box... Jack

Jack Jordan

October 17, 2013 at 12:49 PM

Thanks, as always, Drake... Jack

Poet Tacito

October 17, 2013 at 8:49 AM

Another beauty. The "smoke ring" speak volumes.

Jack Jordan

October 17, 2013 at 12:49 PM

Thanks, as always, Drake... Jack

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 16, 2013 at 10:34 PM

Wonderful use of images, Jack

Jack Jordan

October 16, 2013 at 10:42 PM

Thanks for the comment... Jack

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