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Haiku 96

snowflakes drop slowly
cover the streets all in white
foot prints in the snow

warm glow of the sun
melting ice on barren trees
dagger icicles

winterhaiku

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Paula Goldsmith

January 11, 2023 at 1:30 PM

Your "haiku 96" is a lovely write. Have a great day.................

Jim Slaughter

December 27, 2022 at 10:16 AM

These are very beautiful, Phyllis.

Phyllis Babcock

December 28, 2022 at 11:09 AM

Thank you Jim. Wishing you the best for the new year. love phyl

FJ Thomas

December 19, 2022 at 3:57 PM

Beautiful daggers, but daggers nonetheless! Lol hello Phyl!

Phyllis Babcock

December 26, 2022 at 10:18 AM

Thanks so nice to see your name on my haiku. Wishing you and your family a wonderful holiday season. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

December 7, 2022 at 1:12 PM

hi, my friend. That last line is really awesome with the dagger image!

Phyllis Babcock

December 7, 2022 at 1:39 PM

Thanks Andrea and nice to see your name my friend. Figure I better wake the muse up before it really does go into a winter slumber. haha love phyl

Silent One

December 4, 2022 at 10:52 AM

Vivid imagery in your haiku..

Phyllis Babcock

December 5, 2022 at 12:30 PM

Thank you S1 for your comment. winter can be different daily with drastic changes. Great to look at it out the window at this time. Have a great day. love phyl