Haiku 95

light up the summer sky
reflection on the water
crackling fireworks

hot arid summer day
music playing on back deck
competing crows caw
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Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Now that would be some competition for the crows. LOL..I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara
Proxenos Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 10:45 PM
Such thought provoking words within your Haiku's my friend Phyllis and with each one you submit, you sprinkle magic dust on it .I suspect South Africa especially Johannesburg is in for a sizzling summer . hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Babcock Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 12:02 PM
Thanks for the comment. We have had very hot weather this summer and it has been enjoyable. A lot of storms this year and grasshoppers but that is the Sask. prairies for you. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 2:14 PM
- Excellent haiku, Phyllis - It is not often we have hot and dry summer days ... a lot of rain and gray skies ... summer weather right now is rain and 13 degrees ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Thanks for the comment and a hot hot week for us this week. Enjoy the summer as winter soon comes. love phyl
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