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Haiku 95

light up the summer sky reflection on the water crackling fireworks hot arid summer day music playing on back deck competing crows caw

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2022 7:56:00 AM

Now that would be some competition for the crows. LOL..I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/15/2022 10:45:00 PM

Such thought provoking words within your Haiku's my friend Phyllis and with each one you submit, you sprinkle magic dust on it .I suspect South Africa especially Johannesburg is in for a sizzling summer . hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/16/2022 12:02:00 PM

Thanks for the comment. We have had very hot weather this summer and it has been enjoyable. A lot of storms this year and grasshoppers but that is the Sask. prairies for you. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/13/2022 2:14:00 PM

- Excellent haiku, Phyllis - It is not often we have hot and dry summer days ... a lot of rain and gray skies ... summer weather right now is rain and 13 degrees ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/15/2022 1:02:00 PM

Thanks for the comment and a hot hot week for us this week. Enjoy the summer as winter soon comes. love phyl