Haiku 94

Haiku 94
	
	
	morning tiptoed along slow water winding ways

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Anne-Lise Andresen

October 16, 2013 at 4:15 PM

- Very nice haiku, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

October 16, 2013 at 4:19 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. It's always nice to hear from you... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

October 15, 2013 at 4:15 PM

wow, the perfect imagery... tender and peacefully. I've never seen a haiku in one line....but, I see and feel the...shhhh!...enjoyed. ..linda

Jack Jordan

October 15, 2013 at 4:26 PM

Thanks, Linda. One-line haiku appear to be common these days, and are seen in prominent haiku journals. It seems to me that the ability to play with the words is richer... Jack