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Haiku 90

Haiku 90 what does it mean to be visible and whole — not an abstraction

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Date: 10/2/2013 6:03:00 PM
I really like this idea. I prefer visible to abstract.
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Jack Jordan
Date: 10/2/2013 8:41:00 PM
Me too, most of the time... Jack
Date: 9/30/2013 12:30:00 AM
nicely penned haiku... I fear some in life will never know the answer, they seem oblivious to what is around them while others take everything in...
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:15:00 AM
Unfortunately I believe it's all to easy for an individual to be an abstraction, that is, a number on a spread sheet or compressed into an anonymous member of the masses... jack
Date: 9/28/2013 10:39:00 PM
Nice haiku. (I think the haiku is one of my favorites to write also) Good concept here. Cindy
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Date: 9/29/2013 8:32:00 AM
Thank you, Cindy. Another haiku enthusiast is a good thing... Jack