Haiku 90

Haiku 90
	
	
	what does it mean 
	to be visible and whole — 
	not an abstraction
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Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 6:03 PM
I really like this idea. I prefer visible to abstract.
Jordan Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 8:41 PM
Me too, most of the time... Jack
Adams Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 12:30 AM
nicely penned haiku... I fear some in life will never know the answer, they seem oblivious to what is around them while others take everything in...
Jordan Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 7:15 AM
Unfortunately I believe it's all to easy for an individual to be an abstraction, that is, a number on a spread sheet or compressed into an anonymous member of the masses... jack
Lu Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 10:39 PM
Nice haiku. (I think the haiku is one of my favorites to write also) Good concept here. Cindy
Jordan Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 8:32 AM
Thank you, Cindy. Another haiku enthusiast is a good thing... Jack
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