Haiku 8

the gravel path
glitters with sunlight-- 
dragonfly wings

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Edward Orozco

September 19, 2015 at 11:58 AM

Nicely done. =)

Jeremy Martin

April 18, 2013 at 6:03 AM

I'm glad you're writing poetry about the sparkling quality of nature, which is something I always notice with great delight and sometimes write about myself. Very nice, Heather.

Timothy Hicks

April 10, 2013 at 3:35 AM

A very nice haiku. I adore the image of dragonflies coming out when the sun is bright and warm, making the gravel path less dreary. Haiku in the traditional sense...

Laura Breidenthal

April 5, 2013 at 8:35 PM

The sunlight in this poem truly heightened and brightened our mental senses. A true, glorious haiku. Loved! Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux

April 5, 2013 at 9:54 AM

I had to comment on the sun flower, just love it! you have brightened my day. Great Haiku as well.

Andrea Dietrich

April 4, 2013 at 8:33 PM

oh, this is great how the last line plays off the first two. Love it!

Painted Hunter

April 4, 2013 at 1:27 PM

haiku ninja strikes again...It's a good one, Heather...it's impressive that you wrote, 'the well' as a teenager. I might have posted one or two from that time of my life on here...and I don't even like those.

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