Haiku 8

I feel the lost knot 
of just being, without thought.
The space of regret.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Martin Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 5:00 PM
I've never written any haiku, but this motivates me to want to give it a whirl. Well done ~ Terrell
Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 4:48 PM
one of my favorites from your list of haiku. Love the rhyme of knot and thought.
Jordan Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:06 PM
For me, there's a sadness contained in the space of regret. The rhyme was an accident, I hate to admit. J
A   Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 9:24 PM
Jack , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
Jordan Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 9:32 PM
Why, thank you. It was a good day. I hope yours was too. J
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