Haiku 86

Haiku 86 my shadow plus your shadow equals one shadow

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2013 12:28:00 AM

And the two shall be one. I LIKES!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/20/2013 7:52:00 AM

Great! I'm glad you like it... Jack

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 9/19/2013 8:47:00 PM

Oh this is fantastic. I'm in the mood for love today, and you've said it so well -as I've come to expect. Posted a new poem as you requested, enjoy it.

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/20/2013 7:53:00 AM

Thanks for the read. I enjoyed your new poem, but don't look forward to your absence... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2013 10:03:00 AM

.... and now I come .... then there will be two - Nice haiku, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/19/2013 10:14:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise.