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Haiku 84

Haiku 84 write with abandon about heart... butterflies... her fierce beauty

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Date: 9/14/2013 3:27:00 PM
those words stand out great in the three lines lovely jack tina x
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Date: 9/14/2013 4:18:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Tina.
Date: 9/14/2013 1:46:00 PM
visually engaging, jack.. you really pulled me in with this strong 'ku.. :) huggs
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Date: 9/14/2013 3:12:00 PM
Thanks as always, Nette. I appreciate your comments... Jack
Date: 9/14/2013 9:47:00 AM
Jack, a wonderful haiku... enjoyed the fierce imagery... deep....always..Linda
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Date: 9/14/2013 10:42:00 AM
Thanks, Linda... Jack
Date: 9/14/2013 1:14:00 AM
I love that line: write with abandon. So nice.
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Date: 9/14/2013 6:55:00 AM
Thanks... Have a good weekend... Jack