Haiku 84

Haiku 84
	
	write with abandon 
	about heart... butterflies...
	her fierce beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Moore Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 3:27 PM
those words stand out great in the three lines lovely jack tina x
Jordan Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 4:18 PM
Thanks for the comment, Tina.
Onclaud Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 1:46 PM
visually engaging, jack.. you really pulled me in with this strong 'ku.. :) huggs
Jordan Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 3:12 PM
Thanks as always, Nette. I appreciate your comments... Jack
A   Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Jack, a wonderful haiku... enjoyed the fierce imagery... deep....always..Linda
Jordan Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 10:42 AM
Thanks, Linda... Jack
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 1:14 AM
I love that line: write with abandon. So nice.
Jordan Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 6:55 AM
Thanks... Have a good weekend... Jack
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