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Haiku 82

heavy summer rain
upon the new planted garden
drinking refreshments

rose petals
scarlet red
her ruby lips


summer birds and bees
gather at the raspberries
a feast paradise

summerhaiku

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Sara Kendrick

August 12, 2020 at 4:59 AM

Very creative use of this form. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara

Paul Callus

August 6, 2020 at 1:49 PM

A delightful string of haiku, Phyllis. Each image vies for attention. ~ Regards // paul

Michael Thompson

August 4, 2020 at 9:53 AM

A lovely poem you have written Phyllis

Phyllis Babcock

August 5, 2020 at 3:19 PM

Thanks for your comment Michael. love phyl

Judy Ball

July 30, 2020 at 1:59 PM

Well Done my friend. Very nice imagery here. God Bless, JB

Phyllis Babcock

July 31, 2020 at 5:56 PM

Thanks Judy hope all is well around your area. love phyl

Jack Horne

July 10, 2020 at 2:47 PM

as always, I love your haiku, my friend. I hope you are all well & that all is still OK in your part of Canada (we're gradually emerging here) x

Phyllis Babcock

July 18, 2020 at 12:26 PM

Hi my friend hope all is well in your part of the world. We are doing okay keeping the virus numbers down but hibernating like the bears. lol Opened most things except for anything with big crowds. love phyl