haiku 81

flowers beginning to bloom completion springtime hat thrown in air graduate time ticking of clock fifty years pictures album open past memories the road well traveled worn path

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/30/2020 12:21:00 PM

Your Haiku time line of ones life is well said. As you I wait for all the grandchildren now.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/30/2020 10:07:00 PM

Thanks for your comment on my haiku. love phyl

Paul Callus

Date: 5/21/2020 3:07:00 PM

Haiku of a lifetime, Phyllis. I like the progressive steps taken from early years to the present. I am sure you have many lovely memories to fall on to when you sit in quiet, pensive mood:) Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/21/2020 6:56:00 PM

Thanks Paul. Yes many memories are made over the years. love phyl

jack horne

Date: 5/7/2020 2:24:00 PM

love these thoughtful haikus

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/21/2020 6:56:00 PM

Thanks Jack and thanks for your note. Stay well my friend. love phyl

JENNIFER PROXENOS

Date: 5/5/2020 11:42:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku Phyllis - well penned dear friend. Blessings, Jennifer.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/7/2020 12:01:00 PM

We had to cancel our school reunion due to the virus so we may have it next year. love phyl