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Haiku 7

Moonlit falling leaf Night winds play steal you away From your kindred place Gene Bourne. 03-20-14. .

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Date: 5/30/2014 12:35:00 AM
A beautiful ku my friend. Even in a strict count like this, the rhythm is exceptional and the image is deep. Great work.
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Gene Bourne
Date: 5/30/2014 1:30:00 PM
I very much appreciate that, Chase. Your PS friend,.......Gene Bourne.
Date: 5/14/2014 11:42:00 PM
Hi gene, sometimes I wish I was nothing more than a leaf... I don't mind being kidnapped by the wind, under the moon fall... a wonderful haiku...Love it..Linda
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Gene Bourne
Date: 5/15/2014 5:24:00 AM
Thanks, Linda for that thought provoking comment. I'm glad you liked the Haiku. A change of scenery might be what the leaf needs...then again....that would depend on its destination, I guess Thanks again, friend Linda...Gene.