Haiku 7

Moonlit falling leaf
Night winds play steal you away
From your kindred place


Gene Bourne.
03-20-14.


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Chase Gagnon

May 30, 2014 at 12:35 AM

A beautiful ku my friend. Even in a strict count like this, the rhythm is exceptional and the image is deep. Great work.

Gene Bourne

May 30, 2014 at 1:30 PM

I very much appreciate that, Chase. Your PS friend,.......Gene Bourne.

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May 14, 2014 at 11:42 PM

Hi gene, sometimes I wish I was nothing more than a leaf... I don't mind being kidnapped by the wind, under the moon fall... a wonderful haiku...Love it..Linda

Gene Bourne

May 15, 2014 at 5:24 AM

Thanks, Linda for that thought provoking comment. I'm glad you liked the Haiku. A change of scenery might be what the leaf needs...then again....that would depend on its destination, I guess Thanks again, friend Linda...Gene.

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