Haiku 78

Haiku 78
	
	
	haze blue days...
	others electric yellow
	my sometimes strangeness

how i feelhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2013 at 7:03 AM

Kind of psychedelic, reminding me of old songs from the 60's, Crystal Blue Persuasion or Crimson and Clover! COOL!

Jack Jordan

August 20, 2013 at 8:03 AM

Great references! I didn't have them in mind, but I should have remembered them. Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 20, 2013 at 3:22 AM

- Should be able to conjure .... - Well done Jack, like it!! - Have a happy day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

August 20, 2013 at 8:04 AM

Thanks again, Anne-Lise... Jack

Karen Anglesey

August 19, 2013 at 8:24 PM

Oh, I like this.. My interpretation says this must be about happy pills and such... very well done :)

Jack Jordan

August 19, 2013 at 9:36 PM

Well, something like that... jack

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