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Haiku 75

Haiku 75
	
	sunlight on your face...
	dark hair splashed on the pillow
	your smile, your blue eyes

Copyright © Jack Jordan | Year Posted 2013

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August 21, 2013 at 1:30 PM

intriguing haiku Jack, makes me want them blue eyes. SKAT

August 21, 2013 at 1:39 PM

You know I'll bet that you can have any color you want with the proper contact lenses. I confess that I waffled between blue (my color) and green, which I think is truly beautiful. Choices, choices... Jack

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August 16, 2013 at 9:49 AM

beautiful Jack, a smile will always do... xox...Linda

August 16, 2013 at 10:12 AM

Most of the time...

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 13, 2013 at 2:20 PM

... yes, I have blue eyes.... :))) - Love it, Jack ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

August 13, 2013 at 5:17 PM

I debated blue, green or brown. Blue just seemed the prettiest, although green eyes are very special. Jack

August 13, 2013 at 6:04 AM

Charming Jack

August 13, 2013 at 8:18 AM

Thanks, Donna... Jack

August 12, 2013 at 8:50 AM

Absolutely charming! Cherishing the simple pleasures.

August 12, 2013 at 9:18 AM

Often simple pleasures are the best, and the most lasting as memories.

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