Haiku 73

hot summer day blistering sun soaked shirt hot sand island beach flip flops cool drink under cabana parched lips

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2018 4:18:00 PM

I keep going down your list but I may be caught up with all your poems. Gotta get home now! Sorry I did not find a poem to comment to. I bet I've seen them all but maybe I somehow overlooked a few this summer. I hope we can both hunker down and write a LOT this season

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2018 2:40:00 PM

I really like this hot summer trio!!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/27/2018 10:38:00 PM

I'm ready to hit the beach, Phyllis!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/6/2018 12:15:00 PM

Thanks for the comment. I would like to head for the beach but just had surgery so will be 10 days for stitches to come out. Enjoy that beach for me. lol love phyl