Haiku 73

hot summer day
blistering sun
soaked shirt

hot sand
island beach
flip flops

cool drink
under cabana
parched lips
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Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 4:18 PM
I keep going down your list but I may be caught up with all your poems. Gotta get home now! Sorry I did not find a poem to comment to. I bet I've seen them all but maybe I somehow overlooked a few this summer. I hope we can both hunker down and write a LOT this season
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 2:40 PM
I really like this hot summer trio!!
Man Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 10:38 PM
I'm ready to hit the beach, Phyllis!
Babcock Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Thanks for the comment. I would like to head for the beach but just had surgery so will be 10 days for stitches to come out. Enjoy that beach for me. lol love phyl
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