Haiku 72-Beneath the Sakura Tree

cherry blossom i lick fresh sweetness from his lips
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 12, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Playfully teasing poem Charmaine.
K. Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 11:32 AM
I'm sorry I haven't been here much, even more so, of not being in touch-- my dad hasn't been well for about 20 days now, and my mom also not feeling that well. been busy with family & school... Aww, sweet Christina is growing up too fast! I miss your friendship too-- how i wish I can be her teacher!! Will sleep now, sending you hugs and love, glad to know you are fine and I will catch up soon!
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October 7, 2014 at 11:18 AM
This is definitely so sweet, Charma! I see you posted a bunch of haiku and I hope to read them on another day-- I really enjoyed this sweet haiku--also a bit deviating, but now I wonder what sakura blossom tea tastes like. I hope all is well with you <3!
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October 7, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Ow gee..I am so sorry for your mom and gee your papa too now : (.I will add your papa to my prayers ..your mum is already there.I ll send you an.email one of these days dear.If you were Christina s teacher,that would be cool : ).I show your pics to her at times : ).This month you usually start preparing for halloween too.I remember the pics. Sleep well.Get tp you any other day .
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October 7, 2014 at 11:27 AM
Hi sweet sweet Nikko..How are you?I hope to see more of you cause darn I miss your friendship.I am fine dear.Christina started her baby club lessons every Friday.I go with her,a sort of way to prepare her for nursery next yr and kinder the following.I am fine dear.Hope you abd your family too..Hugs
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October 4, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Very sweet and inviting( not his lips) the poem! Ha-ha! Excellent, dear Charmaine!
Baez Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 9:21 PM
I need a fan to cool myself down. So much heat from such a little flame. This was a real treat to read.
Nance Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Yummy :) how you can say so much in so little, I like it!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Ah so sweet. I like how you surprise me with only nine words Charmaine.
Smith Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:17 PM
how sweet and sensuous.....hugs Tim
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October 3, 2014 at 3:55 PM
A cherry blossom Kiss! How romantic. Loved your Haiku. Darlene
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October 3, 2014 at 3:39 PM
I love it Char. Great idea to do a kind of series of haikus. Love, Maurice.
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 3:22 PM
oh so clever Charmaine - I had to look up Sakura - a delicious haiku its a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xxx
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