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Haiku 72

	
	
	
	Haiku 72
	
	summer Sunday blues
	shadows hide behind my eyes
	this dark afternoon
	
	
	

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/6/2013 10:32:00 PM
Hi Jack; i hope you don't have too many days like that. We all go through those every now and then. Thanks for sharing.... lucilla
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Date: 8/7/2013 7:33:00 AM
Not too many, Lucilla. Thanks for your concern... Jack
Date: 8/6/2013 3:21:00 PM
Interesting Haiku..Enjoyed reading though it seems a little sad..Sara
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Date: 8/6/2013 3:24:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. It was a sad day. Nothing in particular,,, just sad... Jack
Date: 8/6/2013 2:53:00 PM
If you have blue eyes, that gives it even more imagery!! glad to see this one today and I hope your blues get chased away!
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Date: 8/6/2013 3:15:00 PM
Blue feelings, that is...
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Date: 8/6/2013 3:14:00 PM
I hadn't thought about blue eyes, but I do have them. Blues are better...
Date: 8/6/2013 9:20:00 AM
summer and dark.. what a beautiful contrast and a delightful juxtaposition.. well done, again and again, jacck!..:)
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:33:00 AM
Thanks, Nette. I appreciate the comment.
Date: 8/5/2013 9:12:00 AM
There are some strong hidden messages between these few lines. Fantastic job!
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Date: 8/5/2013 11:40:00 AM
Thanks, Drake. I value your comments... Jack