Haiku 72

Haiku 72
	
	summer Sunday blues
	shadows hide behind my eyes
	this dark afternoon

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Lucilla Carrillo

August 6, 2013 at 10:32 PM

Hi Jack; i hope you don't have too many days like that. We all go through those every now and then. Thanks for sharing.... lucilla

Jack Jordan

August 7, 2013 at 7:33 AM

Not too many, Lucilla. Thanks for your concern... Jack

Sara Kendrick

August 6, 2013 at 3:21 PM

Interesting Haiku..Enjoyed reading though it seems a little sad..Sara

Jack Jordan

August 6, 2013 at 3:24 PM

Thanks, Sara. It was a sad day. Nothing in particular,,, just sad... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

August 6, 2013 at 2:53 PM

If you have blue eyes, that gives it even more imagery!! glad to see this one today and I hope your blues get chased away!

Jack Jordan

August 6, 2013 at 3:15 PM

Blue feelings, that is...

Jack Jordan

August 6, 2013 at 3:14 PM

I hadn't thought about blue eyes, but I do have them. Blues are better...

Nette Onclaud

August 6, 2013 at 9:20 AM

summer and dark.. what a beautiful contrast and a delightful juxtaposition.. well done, again and again, jacck!..:)

Jack Jordan

August 6, 2013 at 9:33 AM

Thanks, Nette. I appreciate the comment.

Poet Tacito

August 5, 2013 at 9:12 AM

There are some strong hidden messages between these few lines. Fantastic job!

Jack Jordan

August 5, 2013 at 11:40 AM

Thanks, Drake. I value your comments... Jack

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