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Haiku 72

fir tree pine cone cluster squirrels gather ripe apples decay on ground wasp paradise spring change of color rabbits fur

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Judy Ball

Date: 6/23/2018 7:06:00 AM

Nicely done Phyl. Great job. Really good imagery here. God Bless, JB PS My surgery on my eyes is all done now and it's great. Thanks for your faithful support.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/23/2018 1:46:00 PM

Glad you are on the mend and thanks for your comment on my haiku. Think might have to have a minor surgery will know in the next two weeks see a surgeon on the 3rd. love phyl

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/21/2018 3:26:00 PM

Real haiku !! Congrats, Phyllis. Well done.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/23/2018 1:44:00 PM

Thanks for your comment on my haiku Line. love phyl