Haiku 72

fir tree
pine cone cluster
squirrels gather
 

ripe apples
decay on ground
wasp paradise

spring
change of color
rabbits fur
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June 23, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Nicely done Phyl. Great job. Really good imagery here. God Bless, JB PS My surgery on my eyes is all done now and it's great. Thanks for your faithful support.
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June 23, 2018 at 1:46 PM
Glad you are on the mend and thanks for your comment on my haiku. Think might have to have a minor surgery will know in the next two weeks see a surgeon on the 3rd. love phyl
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June 21, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Real haiku !! Congrats, Phyllis. Well done.
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June 23, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Thanks for your comment on my haiku Line. love phyl
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