Haiku

the heron's walking
secretly, seeing a fish
catch! a net trapped it !

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M. L. Kiser

August 30, 2018 at 1:27 PM

Oops, he should be more careful; the catch is not worth entrapment. Well penned.

Skat A

November 11, 2015 at 10:53 PM

:) SKAT

Tasruzzaman Babu

November 12, 2015 at 9:49 AM

thank u SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

October 28, 2015 at 10:17 PM

Hi T. B., WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tasruzzaman Babu

October 28, 2015 at 10:33 PM

thank u

Skat A

October 28, 2015 at 9:55 PM

Tasruzzaman Babu,,Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Tasruzzaman Babu

October 28, 2015 at 10:34 PM

thank u