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Haiku 71

sun rays
peeking from clouds
warm face

golden fields
soaring blackbirds
worm roundup

grey skies
reflection on lake
raindrops

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/1/2018 6:55:00 PM

Hello Phylis you paint a beautiful picture with your words. Have a nice evening my friend.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/6/2018 5:15:00 PM

Thanks Darlene. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/20/2018 1:11:00 PM

- Beautifully described all three, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/6/2018 5:15:00 PM

thanks Anne Lise am so behind in my comments. Hope summer is good to you. love phyl

Jan Allison

Date: 6/17/2018 5:28:00 PM

a charming set of haiku Phyllis:-) so lovely to see you back:-) hugs jan xx

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/20/2018 12:24:00 PM

Thanks Jan. It was a very very rough year for me now but up and walking but not quite running yet. lol love phyl

Mick Talbot

Date: 6/16/2018 10:57:00 PM

Perfect haiku. Mick

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/20/2018 12:22:00 PM

Thanks Mick. love phyl

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/16/2018 6:10:00 PM

Smooth and natural. I like :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/20/2018 12:22:00 PM

Thanks Casarah. love phyl

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/16/2018 3:29:00 PM

Very nice haiku Phyllis :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 6/20/2018 12:22:00 PM

thanks Heidi. love phyl

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