Haiku 71

sun rays
peeking from clouds
warm face

golden fields
soaring blackbirds
worm roundup

grey skies
reflection on lake
raindrops
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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Hello Phylis you paint a beautiful picture with your words. Have a nice evening my friend.
Babcock Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Thanks Darlene. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 1:11 PM
- Beautifully described all three, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 5:15 PM
thanks Anne Lise am so behind in my comments. Hope summer is good to you. love phyl
Allison Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 5:28 PM
a charming set of haiku Phyllis:-) so lovely to see you back:-) hugs jan xx
Babcock Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Thanks Jan. It was a very very rough year for me now but up and walking but not quite running yet. lol love phyl
Talbot Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 10:57 PM
Perfect haiku. Mick
Babcock Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Thanks Mick. love phyl
Nance Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Smooth and natural. I like :)
Babcock Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Thanks Casarah. love phyl
Sands Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 3:29 PM
Very nice haiku Phyllis :)
Babcock Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 12:22 PM
thanks Heidi. love phyl
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