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Haiku 70 -The Solitary Bird and Solitude

lone bluebird sings

on my back porch swing
  
I hug myself


Or

lone robin sings

on the mountain porch swing

I hug myself

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Richard Lamoureux

October 5, 2014 at 6:59 AM

This is sweet, I like the first one better.

Liam Mcdaid

October 3, 2014 at 11:03 AM

beautifully penned visions charmaine excellent pen dear friend god bless

Daver Austin

October 3, 2014 at 10:28 AM

Love haiku, love these too. The hug is priceless. Thanks, Char, for turning me on to Haiku Journal. They accepted my rose haiku. Lve, daver

Charmaine Chircop

October 3, 2014 at 11:26 AM

I am so happy they did .Hurray!!If I come along other haiku magazines that are open for submissions.I let you know : ).

Casarah Nance

October 3, 2014 at 8:04 AM

I hug you too! hugs hugs wrapped up with loves :)

Ma Yaseen

October 3, 2014 at 2:46 AM

This is lovely, I love it... Well done Malik

Andrea Dietrich

October 2, 2014 at 10:55 PM

hey now this is called killing two birds with one stone. heeheehee. Love this concept, sweet Charma!!

Debbie Guzzi

October 2, 2014 at 9:41 PM

hey little one! you don't need ONE & LONE you can use either or - you could also use A [a bluebird sings/ on the backporch swing- I hug myself] [a] means 1, one means 1, lone means 1 ... Light & Love

Charmaine Chircop

October 3, 2014 at 2:08 AM

Yes dear Deborah my haiku mentor,you are right.I fixed it : )..Thankyou !!!