Haiku 70

snowflakes covers frozen ground broken hand ice around the corner air bound

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Mick Talbot

Date: 6/20/2018 6:32:00 PM

Clever, both... no, very clever! hugs Mick

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 6:50:00 AM

Very awesome poem... X) nice to read this this morning. -JWE

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2018 5:51:00 PM

i hope your daughter does ok.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/14/2018 6:09:00 PM

daughter in law is having no fun with this. She has a cast on and is not able to drive so it is a bummer. love phyl

Silent One

Date: 2/27/2018 2:14:00 PM

Such wonderful imagery...

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/27/2018 2:25:00 PM

Thanks for your comment and enjoy your poems. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/26/2018 12:49:00 AM

- Smooth and dangerous ... I hope it's not your hand that's broken, Phyllis - Be careful, use spikes under the shoes - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/26/2018 12:49:00 PM

No my daughter in law fell and is having surgery on her hand. Slipped on ice and broke it above the wrist. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2018 5:53:00 PM

Phyllis. This one infers for me that you may have broke your hand recently? is that true? I always enjoy seeing you here, my friend.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/26/2018 12:51:00 PM

No not me my daughter in law fell on the ice and is in surgery right now. love phyl

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/25/2018 2:52:00 PM

Hello Phyllis, a nice description of winter. have a nice day my friend.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/26/2018 12:51:00 PM

Thank you for your comment Darlene. love phyl