Haiku 70

snowflakes
covers  frozen ground
broken hand

ice
around the corner
air bound
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Talbot Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 6:32 PM
Clever, both... no, very clever! hugs Mick
Breidenthal Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Very awesome poem... X) nice to read this this morning. -JWE
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 5:51 PM
i hope your daughter does ok.
Babcock Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 6:09 PM
daughter in law is having no fun with this. She has a cast on and is not able to drive so it is a bummer. love phyl
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Such wonderful imagery...
Babcock Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Thanks for your comment and enjoy your poems. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 12:49 AM
- Smooth and dangerous ... I hope it's not your hand that's broken, Phyllis - Be careful, use spikes under the shoes - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 12:49 PM
No my daughter in law fell and is having surgery on her hand. Slipped on ice and broke it above the wrist. love phyl
Dietrich Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 5:53 PM
Phyllis. This one infers for me that you may have broke your hand recently? is that true? I always enjoy seeing you here, my friend.
Babcock Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 12:51 PM
No not me my daughter in law fell on the ice and is in surgery right now. love phyl
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Hello Phyllis, a nice description of winter. have a nice day my friend.
Babcock Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Thank you for your comment Darlene. love phyl
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