Haiku 6 Together

laughter, sweet -- robust,
pouring forth from your belly
my heart leaps with joy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 3, 2015 at 9:07 PM
David, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 9:40 AM
from your belly hmmm real laughter I once joined laughing club.Love David
Jones Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 8:25 AM
A definite 7 from me David. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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November 7, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading it today.,Thanks for the visits to my page.Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 12:09 AM
this one is SO sweet. I love it.
Meade Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 8:20 PM
I know you don't look at replies but just in case -- thank-you. I love belly laughs -- the bigger the belly the better!
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