Haiku 6

bare sun bronzed feet run
sweet clover fields fragrance kissed
honey bee sting hurts
Copyright, August 1, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 12:23 PM
That is true! outstanding haiku! grats on your win
Sietesantos Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Faye. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita
Callus Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 2:32 PM
And what is a sting compared to victory! Congratulations, Faye....what a lovely haiku! Love your images. // paul
Onclaud Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 2:05 PM
well deserving of a high win, faye... this beautifully stings.. huge congrats!.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 11:33 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
Nagpal Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 6:58 AM
Perfect and just beautiful images! Congratulations.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 5:12 AM
Awesome haiku Faye n a perfect win ! huge congrats !
Ryerson Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:16 AM
Did you say 'aha' too? Congratulations my friend! Perfectly done haiku - Tim
Mehta Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:50 AM
Congratulations on winning the first place, Faye
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 11:47 PM
now that is an AHA for the reader. What an awesome haiku, my friend!!! one of the best I have seen in this category.
Walker  Avatar
August 7, 2014 at 11:34 PM
Nice... 1st Place! Congrats!!!
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Barefoot on a bee could not have been fun..Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 11:47 AM
OUCH!!! Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx
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