Haiku 6

bare sun bronzed feet run sweet clover fields fragrance kissed honey bee sting hurts Copyright, August 1, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 12:23:00 PM

That is true! outstanding haiku! grats on your win

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/9/2014 10:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Faye. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 8/8/2014 2:32:00 PM

And what is a sting compared to victory! Congratulations, Faye....what a lovely haiku! Love your images. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 2:05:00 PM

well deserving of a high win, faye... this beautifully stings.. huge congrats!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:33:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Archana Kapoor Nagpal

Date: 8/8/2014 6:58:00 AM

Perfect and just beautiful images! Congratulations.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/8/2014 5:12:00 AM

Awesome haiku Faye n a perfect win ! huge congrats !

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/8/2014 3:16:00 AM

Did you say 'aha' too? Congratulations my friend! Perfectly done haiku - Tim

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 12:50:00 AM

Congratulations on winning the first place, Faye

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2014 11:47:00 PM

now that is an AHA for the reader. What an awesome haiku, my friend!!! one of the best I have seen in this category.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/7/2014 11:34:00 PM

Nice... 1st Place! Congrats!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/2/2014 6:10:00 PM

Barefoot on a bee could not have been fun..Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 8/1/2014 11:47:00 AM

OUCH!!! Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx