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Haiku 6

bare sun bronzed feet run
sweet clover fields fragrance kissed
honey bee sting hurts
Copyright, August 1, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 8/9/2014 12:23:00 PM
That is true! outstanding haiku! grats on your win
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Date: 8/9/2014 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Faye. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita
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Date: 8/8/2014 2:32:00 PM
And what is a sting compared to victory! Congratulations, Faye....what a lovely haiku! Love your images. // paul
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Date: 8/8/2014 2:05:00 PM
well deserving of a high win, faye... this beautifully stings.. huge congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 8/8/2014 11:33:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 6:58:00 AM
Perfect and just beautiful images! Congratulations.
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Date: 8/8/2014 5:12:00 AM
Awesome haiku Faye n a perfect win ! huge congrats !
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Date: 8/8/2014 3:16:00 AM
Did you say 'aha' too? Congratulations my friend! Perfectly done haiku - Tim
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on winning the first place, Faye
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Date: 8/7/2014 11:47:00 PM
now that is an AHA for the reader. What an awesome haiku, my friend!!! one of the best I have seen in this category.
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Date: 8/7/2014 11:34:00 PM
Nice... 1st Place! Congrats!!!
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Date: 8/2/2014 6:10:00 PM
Barefoot on a bee could not have been fun..Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 8/1/2014 11:47:00 AM
OUCH!!! Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx
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