Haiku 6

crowbar tries to pry
my oyster solitary
exists self-contained

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Cindy Lu

May 8, 2012 at 9:21 AM

It's as irriatating as sand in the eyes perhaps, what a pearly geniune write! Much Love, Cindy Lu

Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2012 at 9:37 PM

good one!! love the metaphor

Poet Destroyer A

April 30, 2012 at 8:12 PM

Hi Chuckooroos... how are you today? Me..i'm all over the soup for another 2 hours.. This is a very mysterious haiku.. the image is not clear to me.. however it is an excellent haiku..... enjoyed your poem, take care~ ALWAYS ~ xox ~ PD

Elizabeth Wesley

April 30, 2012 at 9:50 AM

Love the hidden meaning in this Chuck, trying to find your inner self is always a difficult project. You have a perfect haiku with all the rules adhered to as well as words that challenge thought!