Haiku - 6

Winter time Starlings feed from Iron trees
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 12:30 AM
this is really good, Diana. I think it's got that juxtapositioned line they talk about haiku having!
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 7:39 AM
Early morning reading to get the mind buzzing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Diana. Have a fabulous weekend and I hope to see more of your poetry when I get back to the Soup Monday. Usually pretty busy on the weekends with family so don't get to read much. Love, Carol
Bagnall Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 6:26 AM
Nicely done, I tend to prefer the classic syllable count, but this is very good, really enjoyed.
Wilson Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 2:56 AM
beautiful haiku~~love,Deb
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