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Charmaine Chircop

Haiku 69-About the Swan Lake

swan lake

a feather falls 

silently

Copyright © Charmaine Chircop | Year Posted 2014

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October 22, 2014 at 12:35 PM

Agreed with Lyric Man. I am always impressed with people who dare to push the limits with just how short the haiku can be. A real gem, this one... faving!

October 2, 2014 at 6:32 AM

swans always draw so beautiful forever they spend together very beautiful vision charmaine excellent pen dear friend

October 1, 2014 at 3:04 PM

Very nice short poem here. In a few words you bring a gorgeous scene to life. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

October 1, 2014 at 2:56 AM

Gorgeous imagery! Love it.

Andrea Dietrich

September 30, 2014 at 7:21 PM

oh my goodness. you have done it again. this is perfection!!!

September 30, 2014 at 6:23 PM

This is silently perfect Charma......hugs Tim

September 30, 2014 at 5:51 PM

beautiful imagery Charmaine - its a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx

September 30, 2014 at 5:42 PM

Pretty image :)

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