Haiku

I am a purist,
want my haiku to always
be five seven five.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bellen Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Oh Jim, that's not me.. I know you have read my Haiku's :) But yes, the original the better.
Tidd Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Everyone has their own way. In art I like realism over abstract. Just me, I guess.
Gifford Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Sorry, that doesn't include me because I like to experiment and try all forms of haiku. But I do like the 5-7-5 form, too.
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 10:08 AM
Yes, I completely understand what you mean, Jim.
Tidd Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 9:44 AM
I read a lot of haiku, and many of the forms, and I like them. But quite often it seems that some poets don't get the concept of any of the poems, and just take haiku to mean "short poem". With poetry though, it is always a matter of how the poem sounds in your head, I guess, whether writing, reading, or listening.
Foster Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 3:42 PM
Me too!
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