Haiku 68

warm sun
peeking through clouds
happy faces
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green fields
wheat swaying 
motion sickness
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fir tree
pine cone cluster
squirrels gather


10/07/17
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Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 3:44 PM
These were so nice to find! I thought I was caught up to your poems from a month ago, but it looks like i was wrong about that. How time does fly!!
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Good Haiku..Those squirrels will eat the baby pine cones while they are still tender like they are cotton candy..Thanks for the visits to my page..Your stopping by is uplifting..Sara
Horne Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 8:50 AM
oh, love these!
Turner Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 7:22 AM
I see all three perfectly clear Mrs Phyllis. I think the last one is my favorite of the three:)
Babcock Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 10:47 AM
Thanks Daniel. Love to watch the squirrel running up and down the trees. Have one that has been around for a few years and it is fun to watch. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
July 10, 2017 at 1:22 PM
- Lovely haiku, dear Phyllis - The summer is cold here, with a lot of rain and wind - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 10:46 AM
thanks Anne Lise for your comment. Our summer has been very hot and dry. We need the rain badly. love phyl
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