Haiku 67

Haiku 67 cool mist’s embrace Smoky Mountains hiding morning miasma white dogwood flowers Tennessee deep forest shade fiddleheads unfurl

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/17/2013 10:34:00 AM

You are quickly becoming the haiku master of the Soup sir...Are you from that area or were you just visiting?...My hometown is Greenville, S.C. in the northwest corner of the state, nestled in the foothills of the Smokies - Tim

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/17/2013 10:57:00 AM

Thanks for the nice comment. I'm from Oklahoma, but my wife and I were in Gatlinburg, TN for ten days while attended a workshop at Arrowmont... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/17/2013 9:10:00 AM

- Beautiful picture in your haiku X 2, Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/17/2013 10:04:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise. I like your new photo, by the way... Jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/17/2013 9:00:00 AM

I love the mountains. Both Haikus were very atmospheric & engrossing. Excellent!!!