Haiku 65

Haiku 65
	
	
	taut threads of pain
	darkness behind my eyes
	clouds cry
	
	
	
	(Written for a friend.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 1:00 AM
wow, now THIS is haiku!!
Jordan Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 8:16 AM
A lot of pain though... Jack
A   Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 10:19 PM
Hello Sweet, Jack, I feel like haiku tonight... and by the looks of it... you have many to enjoy.... so please do not mind the smiles I will leave behind... xox~ LINDA
A   Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 10:19 PM
ps... a sad thought, and imagery... :-( PD
Jordan Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 11:12 PM
A sad friend...
Tacito Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 6:05 PM
Let it rain. But, the sun shall return. Great job!
Jordan Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 8:10 PM
Thanks for reading my haiku, Drake... Jack
Hamilton Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 4:38 PM
pain and grief in this Jack well written Shadow x smiles
Jordan Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 4:44 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Shadow... Jack
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