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Haiku 65

Haiku 65 taut threads of pain darkness behind my eyes clouds cry (Written for a friend.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/14/2013 1:00:00 AM
wow, now THIS is haiku!!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 7/14/2013 8:16:00 AM
A lot of pain though... Jack
Date: 7/12/2013 10:19:00 PM
Hello Sweet, Jack, I feel like haiku tonight... and by the looks of it... you have many to enjoy.... so please do not mind the smiles I will leave behind... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 7/12/2013 10:19:00 PM
ps... a sad thought, and imagery... :-( PD
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Jack Jordan
Date: 7/12/2013 11:12:00 PM
A sad friend...
Date: 7/11/2013 6:05:00 PM
Let it rain. But, the sun shall return. Great job!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 7/11/2013 8:10:00 PM
Thanks for reading my haiku, Drake... Jack
Date: 7/11/2013 4:38:00 PM
pain and grief in this Jack well written Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/11/2013 4:44:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Shadow... Jack