Haiku 64

spring rain
on valley floor
flash flood
 ****
rain storm
up on the mountains
hikers descend
 ****
barren tree
a squirrel on branch
hawk circles

03/03/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 7:02 PM
These are nice, Phyllis. AREn't you glad spring is here?!
Horne Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 1:15 PM
lovely haiku, my friend. Hope you are feeling better now & enjoyed your Easter xx
Babcock Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 5:52 PM
thanks Jack. Having some dental problems but hopefully get them cleared up soon.
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 3:10 PM
- Hope all is well with you, dear Phyllis - Have a happy Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 3:12 PM
Thanks. Happy Easter to you and your family. Surgery went well now need a few days to recover. Will not have results for 8 weeks but think it looked okay. love phyl
Ball Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Excellent as always Phyl. Hope you are doing well after surgery. Am praying for you. Please send me a message. God Bless, JB
Babcock Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 3:13 PM
Thanks Judy message sent. love phyl
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
April 4, 2017 at 1:42 AM
wow! thats my mama. u are fine and good with this japanes form. i salute u mama.
Babcock Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 3:14 PM
Thank you son so nice to see your name. Happy Easter to you and your family. love ma
Andresen Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 1:18 PM
- This was three beautiful pearls, Phyllis - Well done - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 3:15 PM
Thanks for your comments. love phyl
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 1:10 PM
lovely imagery Phyllis:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 9, 2017 at 3:16 PM
Thanks Jan. Happy Easter. love phyl
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