Haiku

in the moons arc
diminished light...
an unfinished book

22/2/2015 DAW

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Daniel Schack

Date: 3/1/2022 9:39:00 AM

Perhaps life is an unfinished book.be well.

FJ Thomas

Date: 12/31/2020 4:49:00 PM

How very lovely David. So glad to see you back here!

Daniel Schack

Date: 6/27/2019 6:46:00 AM

nice haiku mr. Williams. alway's liked your comment on sleazy sally from2012. got lot's new stuff. feel free 2 see/comment.

Daniel Schack

Date: 5/31/2018 6:39:00 AM

hope you're around.it's Daniel schack.liked your haiku and my poem sleazy sally just reached 1000 views. never forgotand always appreciated your comment. sorry bout delay in replying. see lots of new material on my site. hope you can comment again , sincerely, Daniel schack

Daniel Schack

Date: 5/26/2017 9:53:00 PM

hi mr. david williams. it's daniel schack. thank u for your praise on my very first post a few yrs ago. look at more pal. googool poems of daniel schack on the soup. for my art googool tumblr.com-adanthemanworld. also i'm on facebook/twitter. hope 4 mo comments. be well. dantheman.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/17/2017 5:35:00 AM

Yes, it is constantly cycling. It will go on for some time. Very clever.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/13/2016 8:00:00 AM

A masterful Haiku. I hope one day that you will return to the soup.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2016 2:59:00 AM

David , .. I'm pleased to hear from you today... hugs... Tex...

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/9/2016 3:40:00 PM

Hi David at last caught up with you...as for the poem, can't wait for the full moon, the possibilities are mind-boggling

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2016 5:46:00 PM

David, thank you so much for passing by my poems. Always ~TEX~

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/29/2016 6:40:00 PM

ohh.. this is a perfect little piece

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2016 3:58:00 PM

David. wish you were a premium member and could blog for us about what you have been up to. I would love to know! Soupmail me if you have anything new in your life to tell me. thanks for visiting my poem today.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/27/2016 12:57:00 AM

Love Texas Bella

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/20/2016 10:23:00 AM

Good morning David... LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2015 7:18:00 AM

- Hi David - I Just want to say - Marry Christmas and a peaceful new year 2016 :) -Hope all is well with you and your family - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 7:02:00 PM

David, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Vicki Acquah

Date: 11/21/2015 9:17:00 PM

David the next time you tell me people are /were .."put Off" by the mislabeling of my poetry could you be so kind as to suggest what category of poem is..rather than -"what it is not" thanks...

Holly Moore

Date: 10/29/2015 6:53:00 AM

Wow! My dear friend...I've missed you. I really did miss you...this is so beautiful. It gives me the chills. I just love everything about it....even the formatting, the use of lowercase letters. I can envision the entire setting in my mind. soupmail....xxoo hpm

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/26/2015 7:18:00 AM

Visuals and a sense of awe.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/9/2015 2:39:00 AM

There are indeed rainbows that form from the light of the moon. My daughter saw one while the full moon hung over the ocean. I wrote a poem about it but I don't remember the title. I adored this beautiful haiku!

Skat A

Date: 10/7/2015 8:31:00 AM

Hi David, without a doubt this is the best haiku to my opinion on this site. WOW. The moons arc imagery is very unique. Always a joy to read. SKAT

Heather Ober

Date: 9/6/2015 11:25:00 AM

I agree with Andrea below - This is how a haiku should be written. A glimpse of a moment in time that kick-starts the reader's imagination. Well done, David!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2015 11:10:00 PM

gosh, it's been WAY too long since you commented to me at Soup. Otherwise, I'd have seen this sparkling gem by now! This to me is exactly how a haiku should be written! I sure hope to see some new poems from you. I love being able to read your latest works. thanks for the birthday greeting too, my friend.

Jack Horne

Date: 8/19/2015 2:47:00 PM

love this haiku. hope you and your family are doing well, my friend