Haiku 63

summer rain
- on the window
--  book in hand
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autumn leaves
- on front yard
--  coffee perking
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Breidenthal Avatar
January 10, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Wonderful haiku! Unique and delightful ! =)
Anish Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 5:35 PM
Nice images in these two short poems! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Babcock Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Thank you Matthew for your comment. love phyl
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 11:30 AM
I enjoyed the imagery in your poems Phyllis. This is a lovely poem to read this morning.Thank you for the cheer! ; ) 7
Babcock Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Coffee in hand at the moment. Still nice to sit on the deck and enjoy the fall. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 1:19 PM
- Great haiku, Phyllis - Hoped the sun would shine on the beautiful autumn colors - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Sun is shining today Anne Lise and will be a nice day to spend outside. love phyl
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