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i was a great fool keep loving you,thinking of you though someone else inyour hearth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/10/2015 10:07:00 AM
Great one. You may try 5-7-5 traditional form of haiku. God bless. Welcome to PS. Love>>>rajat
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Pranath Khatri
Date: 2/10/2015 10:10:00 AM
thank u sir,its my very first one haiku sir.Thank u sir for your suggestion highly appreciate..

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