Haiku

i was a great fool
keep loving you,thinking of you
though someone else inyour hearth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chakrabarty Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Great one. You may try 5-7-5 traditional form of haiku. God bless. Welcome to PS. Love>>>rajat
Khatri Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 10:10 AM
thank u sir,its my very first one haiku sir.Thank u sir for your suggestion highly appreciate..
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