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Haiku 61

winter sun
 shines on snow drift
 deep footprints
     ~~~
 freezing rain
 upon the sidewalk
 slippery slopes
     ~~~
 frozen ice
 upon the pond
 skating rink
     ~~~

14/02/16

winterhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2016 at 8:03 PM

It's nice to see your wintry poems that I missed out on earlier. Thanks for visiting me today.

Debbie Duncan

February 21, 2016 at 3:30 PM

Love your Haiku :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

February 19, 2016 at 5:36 PM

Super HAIKU series Phyl! Lovely imagery... Well done! Keith

Ijm Seven

February 14, 2016 at 4:18 PM

I really can appreciate the first, although all three were delightful. "Deep footprints" is a wonderful separation pf tbe first 2 lines allowing one's imagination to dill the gap. Well done

Ijm Seven

February 14, 2016 at 4:18 PM

Excuse my poor phone skills

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 14, 2016 at 12:18 PM

- A wonderful image of winter dear Phyllis, look like what I see out of my window :) - ...... it's cold! - Thank you for many visits by you today, your words are always positive and good :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)