Haiku 61

Haiku 61 the neighbors arrive big rig diesel whumping our tiny trailer

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/5/2013 4:57:00 PM

I want to move ;},,,, now on to # 2 ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 10:30:00 PM

ha I' see this imagery perfect... a tiny trailer hitched to the back of a loud breathing truck... excellent...PD

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 7/6/2013 9:21:00 AM

Nicely done

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/6/2013 9:26:00 AM

Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2013 6:06:00 PM

those friends you just spoke of, are very nasty ones!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/5/2013 8:13:00 PM

They are indeed, and are very difficult to keep in a box with the lid on tight. They like to escape and create a bit of havoc now and then... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2013 10:03:00 AM

GOOD one, down to earth and enjoyable haiku.

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/4/2013 5:37:00 PM

Thanks! We're always the smallest trailer in the camp at 17'. It's always good for a laugh... Jack