Haiku 61

Haiku 61
	
	the neighbors arrive
	big rig diesel whumping
	our tiny trailer

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Debbie Duncan

August 5, 2013 at 4:57 PM

I want to move ;},,,, now on to # 2 ;}

Poet Destroyer A

July 12, 2013 at 10:30 PM

ha I' see this imagery perfect... a tiny trailer hitched to the back of a loud breathing truck... excellent...PD

Seosamh De Burca

July 6, 2013 at 9:21 AM

Nicely done

Jack Jordan

July 6, 2013 at 9:26 AM

Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

July 4, 2013 at 6:06 PM

those friends you just spoke of, are very nasty ones!!

Jack Jordan

July 5, 2013 at 8:13 PM

They are indeed, and are very difficult to keep in a box with the lid on tight. They like to escape and create a bit of havoc now and then... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

July 4, 2013 at 10:03 AM

GOOD one, down to earth and enjoyable haiku.

Jack Jordan

July 4, 2013 at 5:37 PM

Thanks! We're always the smallest trailer in the camp at 17'. It's always good for a laugh... Jack

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