Haiku 6-16-2016

Haiku 6-16-2016

stillness on water
nature gazing at herself
longing for her youth


John G. Lawless
6/16/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Misra Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 5:07 AM
This one runs deep. Nature gazing at herself - one of the best lines flowing seamlessly from the first line. A seven from me. ~karam~
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June 18, 2016 at 7:14 AM
Thank you Karam for the high mark and the kind words.
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:32 PM
wow, GOOD one. YES!
Lawless Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 7:13 AM
So, Andrea, the Haiku/Senryu torments me but like the curious cat.....Thanks for your continuing support.
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