Haiku 6-15-2016

Haiku 6/15/2016

warmth rises slowly
beckoning the cold blooded
silent slitherer


John G. Lawless
6/15/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gazbowski Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 11:26 AM
Nice write John, I like reptiles - my ex wife was one, but she was too cold :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2016 at 8:41 PM
ooh, great sound effect in last line.
A  Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 8:42 PM
Wow, makes me wonder... However it sure does... A perfect and a fav, ... I don't know why, but I love the second line... Skat
Lawless Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Glad you liked it SKAT, thanks for stopping to comment
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