Haiku 60

morning sun
mist upon the water
lovers kiss


01/02/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Awesome. gosh how many have I missed of yours??
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 10:39 PM
ENJOYED
Babcock Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Thanks for your comment. love phyl
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 4:29 PM
Lovely!
Babcock Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Thank you for your comment on my haiku. phyl
A  Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:26 PM
lovely haiku..... SKAT
Babcock Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:05 AM
Thanks for your comment. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 2:09 PM
- This was sweet, lovely haiku dear Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Thanks for your comment. love phyl
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 1:41 PM
A 7, and a definite favourite! Delightful language and imagery. SWEET! Best wishes, Keith
Babcock Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Glad you enjoyed this haiku. love phyl
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